Action Tags

If you use "said" too much in writing a novel, it becomes redundant. If you use other words that might be considered synonyms for "said," it sounds awkward. So, what's a writer to do? Use action tags. They can help move the story, provide more information, and enliven the story.

Action tags describe a movement or give an action right before or after the speaker says something, letting the reader know who is talking. Here are some examples:

Ellen gripped the chair arm. "I don't know what you're talking about."

A slow grin spread over his face. "Darling, you don't know what you're asking."

"Connor is back in town." Kaylee tried to keep her voice as normal as possible. Had she succeeded?

The writer may still need to sprinkle some saids throughout the story, especially in a long conversation with more than two people, but they can be used sparingly by also using action tags. In addition, the story will become a whole lot more interesting.

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